Nora Hazard's story begins over three years prior to the events of Delvers LLC Welcome to Ludus On Ludus life is often cheap Nora’s childhood hadn’t given her many options With nowhere else to go after losing her family she had joined an old friend in a street gang and found an unlikely home there But unfortunately tragedy is about to befall Nora Grudges from the distant past and movements of shadowy organizations may take away everything she is familiar with and all that she holds dearpossibly even her life Danger has never stopped her before but survival may require escaping her old life and embarking on an insane desperate journey On the way she might even accidentally stumble into both an incredible opportunity and an incredible burden Unfortunately for her enemies Nora was no pushover beforeand that was before discovering super powers This series has A badass female MC Gritty violence Rough language A harsh fantasy world with its own moral compass Bravery Loyalty


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    I tried reading Welcome to Ludus about 1 year ago and had to drop it 30% in Feel free to look at my review at the time for the finer points but in a nutshell the quality of writing was just too much of an impediment to me immersing in the story Blaise Corvin is a prominent author in the LitRPG genre though so I figured I'd give him another try with a newer offeringUnfortunately while this book may be a bit better the same problems are present About 90% of the first 7 pages are a brutally boring infodump Trying to keep my eyes from skimming down the page was like an 8 year old trying to hold the leash on a rottweiler when a rabbit runs by The economy of words is also very poor The wording is very passive and bloated even during action scenesExample I'd been hoping she'd be crazy enough to grab my hair but I wasn't that lucky Just like I'd expected the beautiful killer darted in her knife going for a killing strike to my heart while her other hand darted out to secure my knife handThe passive and overly long description interferes with what is supposed to be a fast paced scene I don't know why the character feels a need to note the beauty of her attacker for the 3rd time in the middle of the fight this is 1st person pov so details should be specific to what the character pays attention to rather than just throwing random stuff in there Also I just tend to have a problem with repeating the same verb twice in a sentence in general but even so in an overly long sentence see 'darted'As other negative reviews have mentioned a character with multiple stab wounds who's doing the whole cliche dying speech goes on FOREVER in a scene that failed to be serious and only had me laughing at the levels of cliche that I rarely see outside of a parodyI gave the book about 30 pages before concluding that there is no way I will be able to enjoy it If there's a good story in there unfortunately the quality of writing again is just getting in the way